Please rate my song! im 13 years old!?

ok this song is called party on .. i just wrote it in 5 mins so it may be bad . but rate and comment pleaseee .. 1-10 ..im 13

It� �s Friday its finally our day
To have some fun
Hang in the sun
Out with all my friends
Besties till the end
Tonights our night to have some fun

(verse 1)
We all need this
To let our hair down
And flirt with boys all over town
Its our night to rock this world and� �

(chorus)
we� �re gonna stay out
play till the sun comes up
we� �re gonna be crazy be teengagers
that is what we do
so let� �s go party on with you

it� �s 8 o� �clock and were gossiping
shes ugly did she actally say that!?
In our world its nothing new
Tonights our night to have some fun

(verse 2)
We all need this
To let our hair down
And flirt with boys all over town
Its out night to rock this world and� �

(chorus)

then Monday comes
its so sad stuck in school
but we deal with it then
out night comes..

everyone needs it
to let your hair down
to flirt with boys all over town
its everyones night to this world and� �

(chorus x2)

thats so cute!

Stupid.
I rate it a 0.

Sorry, I hate being honest.
Actually, I love it, because it's fun. :D

I agree with the Disney Channel-ness of it all. Belongs in one of those High School Musical movies. only i think theirs r better. you suck. try again.

woww. thats really good
good lyricss!! keep it up
ill give you a rating of...ummm.. 9 =)

five min!!!!!!!!
that awesome

cute, sounds like it could be on the Disney channel

Yeah its sounds very Miley Cyrus like.

But anyway good lyrics keep it up.

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